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Yatto owatta! ~__~ I decided to stick the WIP translation in Yahoo!Notepad in case I had the time and inclination to work on it...I just went through the last check and am more or less satisfied with it. These were, for me, the hardest chapters of the manga for some reason. In any case, chapters 3, 4, 5, and 6 are already done. It only took...how many months?
Chapter 01
p004
"Are you supposed to be a hoodlum?"
"I hate small fry like you."
p005
"You're late."
p006
"Really? I'm on time."
"Diamonds are [a] girl's best friend."
"--But we are the diamonds' best friend."
"Just wait. We'll come get you soon."
"Sorry, I'm late."
p007
"You know him?"
"I don't know a small time crook like him."
"Get along with him. He's the driver for this job. He's young, but good."
p008
"Oops."
"Can't drop this."
p009
"They're after us already."
"They're here too soon, like they've been waiting for us."
p010
"They're next to us. We're finished if they block our path."
"I know."
p011
"Go faster. Get in front of them!"
"Get down!"
p013
"What the hell are you guys doing? I gave you all the information."
"--Don't screw up next time. There won't be another chance."
p014
"Who were you calling?"
"My daughter."
"She's my ex-wife's..."
"I don't have an obligation to see her, but sometimes I want to hear her voice."
"Everyone is waiting at the 'office.'"
p015
"Did he move the 'office' again?"
"Yes."
"He's a suspicious guy."
"--Hey"
p016
"You're young and talented. You could do well in another line of work."
"You should get a better job."
"I've stopped stealing coins out of parking meters."
"It's just as you said."
"You're sensible. And clever. ..But that's not what I'm talking about."
"A normal life."
"--A normal job."
p017
"--I did that, a little."
"Even with ability I was no good. I got fired the moment I told them what I really thought."
"The guys I work with now trust me."
"--In the end, everyone will betray other people to save themselves."
"--You too?"
p018
"--I"
"Might do that, too."
"You seem like someone I could trust."
"--Don't."
"What the hell is this?"
p020
"It's finally over."
"It was a long investigation, wasn't it?"
"I can finally retire. It really was long."
"I'm not suited for undercover investigations."
"So modest. This is quite an achievement."
"!"
p021
"Undercover investigation?"
"You asshole! Traitor!"
"I'll kill you!"
"I'll kill you!"
p024
"No survivors. This is Yukikaze, mission accomplished."
"'No survivors?' Damn SAF, you let us get massacred without helping us."
"Damn you, you reapers."
p025
"Lt. Fukai, a bogey is heading this way."
"Bogey?"
"No response on IFF."
"Then it's an enemy."
"No, it's a Sylph! It's one of ours!"
p026
"Confirm it."
"No response. It's no good. It's gone into attack mode!"
"I'll destroy it."
"Don't, Lt. Fukai!"
p030
"So you're awake."
"Yukikaze?"
"Calm down."
"Leave me alone."
"I heard you're going to be court-martialed."
p031
"That has to be some kind of mistake."
"Though I doubt you'll listen to me, that eye needs to be examined."
"I'll decide that."
"Did you not listen to other people back on Earth, too?"
"What in the world did you do to get sent here to Fairie?"
"Who knows? Everyone on Earth probably hates me."
"Where are you going?"
p032
"I'm going to make sure she's all right."
"What?"
"Yukikaze--my only best friend."
Chapter 02
p035
"What happened?"
"Hey."
p036
"Dad."
"Dad?"
"Dad."
p038
"Dad."
"Dad."
p040
"That child..."
"Is the only survivor of a family suicide."
p041
"It's been a year since he's come here, but he hasn't spoken a single word."
"As if nothing interested him."
"--I don't want to say this, but maybe you should reconsider..."
"We understand."
"But someone has to help him."
p042
"I know you've brought your clothes, but you don't need them."
"We're going to throw everything away and get new things."
"You don't need this jacket anymore."
"!"
p043
"Give it back!"
p044
"--You have to throw everything away. It may be hard for you, but you have to overcome [the past] by doing so."
"Give it back!"
p046
"I'm sorry for calling you in."
"Your parents are here. Go back to your class."
"Study hard."
"He's actually an obedient and good child."
p047
"He bit his teacher's arm again?"
"Yes."
"--And this as well."
"He had this in his pocket."
"He must have some reason."
p048
"Yes, I think so too. But he won't say anything."
"Perhaps you should speak with a counselor?"
"There's nothing wrong with him."
"But he causes a new problem every week."
p052
"Why are you setting a fire?"
"To gain some time."
"I don't have my watch."
"I dropped my watch inside!"
"You can't get it already!"
p053
"Shit!"
p054
"This way."
p055
"This is the SAF hanger"
"The fighters here are called Super Sylphs."
"This way."
p057
"Don't touch them."
p058
"Did you write the report?"
p059
"Just this one page?"
"Do the work you're paid for."
"About the incident where you destroyed the Sylph..."
"That was a JAM."
p060
"--It was a "bogey.'"
"The preliminary review board will probably decide against you."
"--Don't you care?"
p061
"--If they find you guilty they'll send you back to Earth."
"I'm not going to hand [her] over to anyone."
"What?"
"No one."
p062
"I've asked General Cooley to give testimony supporting you."
"I won't owe anything to anyone."
"It's not a debt."
"It's reciprocation. Help the General out of her crisis."
p063
"Major Gunow from Systems proposed a test flight against an SAF craft."
"General Cooley fell for his provocation."
"The Major wants to display the abilities of the UAV he's so proud of. He probably said that the Sylphid is no match for the Flip Knight or something like that."
"It has nothing to do with me."
"Or do you enjoy deskwork?"
"Yukikaze's repair is completed."
p064
"Take the Major down a peg with her."
"Hey."
The only thing I can say is...Rei's life sucked pretty hard. I'm glad he was able to meet Jack, someone he could actually trust who wouldn't betray him (Yukikaze as well, of course). I'm too tired to comment any more than that.
Chapter 01
p004
"Are you supposed to be a hoodlum?"
"I hate small fry like you."
p005
"You're late."
p006
"Really? I'm on time."
"Diamonds are [a] girl's best friend."
"--But we are the diamonds' best friend."
"Just wait. We'll come get you soon."
"Sorry, I'm late."
p007
"You know him?"
"I don't know a small time crook like him."
"Get along with him. He's the driver for this job. He's young, but good."
p008
"Oops."
"Can't drop this."
p009
"They're after us already."
"They're here too soon, like they've been waiting for us."
p010
"They're next to us. We're finished if they block our path."
"I know."
p011
"Go faster. Get in front of them!"
"Get down!"
p013
"What the hell are you guys doing? I gave you all the information."
"--Don't screw up next time. There won't be another chance."
p014
"Who were you calling?"
"My daughter."
"She's my ex-wife's..."
"I don't have an obligation to see her, but sometimes I want to hear her voice."
"Everyone is waiting at the 'office.'"
p015
"Did he move the 'office' again?"
"Yes."
"He's a suspicious guy."
"--Hey"
p016
"You're young and talented. You could do well in another line of work."
"You should get a better job."
"I've stopped stealing coins out of parking meters."
"It's just as you said."
"You're sensible. And clever. ..But that's not what I'm talking about."
"A normal life."
"--A normal job."
p017
"--I did that, a little."
"Even with ability I was no good. I got fired the moment I told them what I really thought."
"The guys I work with now trust me."
"--In the end, everyone will betray other people to save themselves."
"--You too?"
p018
"--I"
"Might do that, too."
"You seem like someone I could trust."
"--Don't."
"What the hell is this?"
p020
"It's finally over."
"It was a long investigation, wasn't it?"
"I can finally retire. It really was long."
"I'm not suited for undercover investigations."
"So modest. This is quite an achievement."
"!"
p021
"Undercover investigation?"
"You asshole! Traitor!"
"I'll kill you!"
"I'll kill you!"
p024
"No survivors. This is Yukikaze, mission accomplished."
"'No survivors?' Damn SAF, you let us get massacred without helping us."
"Damn you, you reapers."
p025
"Lt. Fukai, a bogey is heading this way."
"Bogey?"
"No response on IFF."
"Then it's an enemy."
"No, it's a Sylph! It's one of ours!"
p026
"Confirm it."
"No response. It's no good. It's gone into attack mode!"
"I'll destroy it."
"Don't, Lt. Fukai!"
p030
"So you're awake."
"Yukikaze?"
"Calm down."
"Leave me alone."
"I heard you're going to be court-martialed."
p031
"That has to be some kind of mistake."
"Though I doubt you'll listen to me, that eye needs to be examined."
"I'll decide that."
"Did you not listen to other people back on Earth, too?"
"What in the world did you do to get sent here to Fairie?"
"Who knows? Everyone on Earth probably hates me."
"Where are you going?"
p032
"I'm going to make sure she's all right."
"What?"
"Yukikaze--my only best friend."
Chapter 02
p035
"What happened?"
"Hey."
p036
"Dad."
"Dad?"
"Dad."
p038
"Dad."
"Dad."
p040
"That child..."
"Is the only survivor of a family suicide."
p041
"It's been a year since he's come here, but he hasn't spoken a single word."
"As if nothing interested him."
"--I don't want to say this, but maybe you should reconsider..."
"We understand."
"But someone has to help him."
p042
"I know you've brought your clothes, but you don't need them."
"We're going to throw everything away and get new things."
"You don't need this jacket anymore."
"!"
p043
"Give it back!"
p044
"--You have to throw everything away. It may be hard for you, but you have to overcome [the past] by doing so."
"Give it back!"
p046
"I'm sorry for calling you in."
"Your parents are here. Go back to your class."
"Study hard."
"He's actually an obedient and good child."
p047
"He bit his teacher's arm again?"
"Yes."
"--And this as well."
"He had this in his pocket."
"He must have some reason."
p048
"Yes, I think so too. But he won't say anything."
"Perhaps you should speak with a counselor?"
"There's nothing wrong with him."
"But he causes a new problem every week."
p052
"Why are you setting a fire?"
"To gain some time."
"I don't have my watch."
"I dropped my watch inside!"
"You can't get it already!"
p053
"Shit!"
p054
"This way."
p055
"This is the SAF hanger"
"The fighters here are called Super Sylphs."
"This way."
p057
"Don't touch them."
p058
"Did you write the report?"
p059
"Just this one page?"
"Do the work you're paid for."
"About the incident where you destroyed the Sylph..."
"That was a JAM."
p060
"--It was a "bogey.'"
"The preliminary review board will probably decide against you."
"--Don't you care?"
p061
"--If they find you guilty they'll send you back to Earth."
"I'm not going to hand [her] over to anyone."
"What?"
"No one."
p062
"I've asked General Cooley to give testimony supporting you."
"I won't owe anything to anyone."
"It's not a debt."
"It's reciprocation. Help the General out of her crisis."
p063
"Major Gunow from Systems proposed a test flight against an SAF craft."
"General Cooley fell for his provocation."
"The Major wants to display the abilities of the UAV he's so proud of. He probably said that the Sylphid is no match for the Flip Knight or something like that."
"It has nothing to do with me."
"Or do you enjoy deskwork?"
"Yukikaze's repair is completed."
p064
"Take the Major down a peg with her."
"Hey."
The only thing I can say is...Rei's life sucked pretty hard. I'm glad he was able to meet Jack, someone he could actually trust who wouldn't betray him (Yukikaze as well, of course). I'm too tired to comment any more than that.
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Date: 2005-09-25 12:30 am (UTC)I'm gonna clean it up tomorrow (too tired tonight) to explain the images that goes with it for manga-deprived fans (with all kudos to you, like I did with the others)... and I will be in a position to print all the translations and put it in my manga YAY!!!!!