Pot Doujinshi: Chijou no tori

[insaneneko]

I've dug up more translations I kind of abandoned a long time ago! This time, a short TezuRyo doujinshi I scanned in one of my fits of scanning madness. I did a quick pass at correcting the more awful manglings so now it's moderately passable (I'm very open to suggestions on better wordings and translations, thanks). :P I didn't bother sticking the cover in the post because it's boring and brown and has no picture on it. Anyone curious, just download it! It's only about 1 MB. ^^

Chijou no tori (Earthbound bird)



p05

Tezuka: After this...I'll be finished when I submit the league list to Ryuzaki sensei
Tezuka: Looks like I'll be able to get back to the club room before the meeting finishes
Tezuka: Him (again!)
Tezuka: As soon as he comes to practice and finds out he can't use the courts, he immediately does this...We have to do something about that personality that is completely lacking in cooperative spirit... (Hm?!)

p06

What Echizen was gazing straight at...
There was
Tezuka: What in the world?
Only the "sky"

p07

Tezuka: What are you looking at?
sfx: ge (Ack!)
sfx: kasa (Sit up)
Ryoma: Nothing, really

p08

Tezuka: That can't be true
sfx: posu (plop)
Tezuka: You were looking up at the sky now...So shouldn't you say you were looking at the sky?
Ryoma: What!?
Ryoma: What is this guy talking about?
Tezuka: Gazing at the sky so hard...Echizen
Tezuka: What were you thinking?

p09

Ryoma: Nothing
sfx: mu (irritated)
Ryoma: Then, Bucho...Are you always thinking about things like that?
Ryoma: Everytime you look at the sky do you think, "Ah, it's the sky"...You bother to think that!?
Tezuka: ...No...
Ryoma: Stuff like that cloud looks like a hamburger?
Tezuka: Well...You are essentially right, but it's a bit different
How unusual
That Echizen is interested in a person outside of a match
(You're happy, aren't you, Kunimitsu)
Tezuka: For example, when you're changing in the club room

p10

Tezuka: First you think that you have to undo all the buttons to take off your clothes, right?...And at the same time you remember everything that happened during practice that day, and at times reflect on them
Tezuka: And while worrying about the scratch on the shelf in front of you, you listen to the conversations around you...
sfx: bou[zen] (dumbfounded)
Tezuka: ...Don't you do that?
Ryoma: No!!
Tezuka (small): Is that right...
Ryoma: Do you think things like that all the way up to when you fall asleep?...You don't ever zone out!?

p11

Tezuka: I don't
sfx: fun (humph!)
Ryoma (small): For real?
Tezuka: I don't think it's that unusual
Ryoma: No, I think you're definitely about the only one like that
Tezuka: You think about various things before you fall asleep in your bed, right?
Ryoma: I'm asleep in three seconds
Ryoma: But doesn't that
Ryoma: Tire you?

p13

sfx: fuwa (flutter)
Ryoma: That's why you're old...Bucho

p14

Wha...
Ryoma: Crap (That was taboo)
Tezuka: ...Echizen...As punishment for skipping the meeting
Tezuka: 50 laps!!
Ryoma: Don't you think you're taking it too personally?
Tezuka: Be quiet! Hurry up and go!
Ryoma: Man...
sfx: tatatata (dash)

p15

Tezuka: ...
What was that just now?...
It's as if, for a second
sfx: basa (flutter)
As if my heart felt light...

p16

Aah!

p17

FIN

***

I like the idea that Tezuka thinks all the time. Seriously, doesn't he get tired? XD

Comments

[prillalar]

Thanks for this -- I really liked how low-key it was. Tezuka's puzzlement is very sweet.

I like the idea that Tezuka thinks all the time. Seriously, doesn't he get tired?

I was thinking how much I identified with him here. *g*

[defade.livejournal.com]

Sorry to bother you, but can you upload it to another server? Rapidshare doesn't work for me.

Any other server is fine, YSI, MU, Sendspace, you-name-it.

Thanks in advance.

[madamada-chan.livejournal.com]

wahahahahaha XD really, really funny. thanks for sharing this~! (glomps)